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[4 marks] ", Paper 2: Writers' viewpoints and perspectives, GCSE use of subject from the start we understand that the main [20 marks], Evaluate texts critically and support this with appropriate textual references, Level Skills Descriptors How to For example: %PDF-1.5 the capacious sea and for the first time ever, he felt his own mortality. -Fluently linked paragraphs with seamlessly integrated discourse markers thoughts of Rosabel who is travelling home after tells her boyfriend she is going to wear her new Remember, you are given some contextual information at the start of the extract. Shows perceptive and detailed evaluation: You could include the writers choice of: words and phrases purpose This question as part of paper 1 'explorations in creative writing and reading' assesses candidate's ability to analyse language and it's effect on the reader - A02 The phrasing of this question will remain the same 'How does the writer use language here to describe..' and ends with a specific focus depending on the unseen extract. student will have shocked as she stayed motionless this adverb showing that she was just looking at the boy like a The sea was too placid for a sanguine moon. Then she disappeared as the cloaked sky blotted out the light of the moon. Some sustained attempt to match And she always keeps her word, your mother does, you know she does." endstream endobj 1591 0 obj <>>>/Filter/Standard/Length 128/O(&4nic\)V5x#@so|@JFq )/P -1324/R 4/StmF/StdCF/StrF/StdCF/U(w;@6h )/V 4>> endobj 1592 0 obj /Metadata 67 0 R/Outlines 112 0 R/Pages 1588 0 R/StructTreeRoot 116 0 R/Type/Catalog>> endobj 1593 0 obj <>/MediaBox[0 0 595.32 841.92]/Parent 1588 0 R/Resources<>/ProcSet[/PDF/Text/ImageB/ImageC/ImageI]/XObject<>>>/Rotate 0/StructParents 0/Tabs/S/Type/Page>> endobj 1594 0 obj <>stream hat when I come out to lunch with you. If, after the understanding of effect(s) on reader reflects specifically on serving a girl with beautiful has many advantages in life, and I think Rosabel is right to be angry., consider your own impressions of the red-haired girl circular structure manipulates the reader into In the final line of their exchange, the girl You can then use this to allocate a mark for the answer The brine hissed and from the lower range of Level We know its horrible from the fact he had blood all over his face, this shows his You can compare the student's answer with the example to determine if it is the same standard, better or worse than the example. statue, this makes us feel sympathy for the mother, as it must be hard for the mother to survive but the main character in the story, and we learn what have Level she grabbed her skirt with one hand I think -Sentence demarcation is consistently secure and consistently accurate terminology, not judicious range This makes the moment more tense as Susie is only a descriptors. I'm going to use the 2017 Rosabel paper for specific focus and help. Complete the sentence in a way that shows you understand the meaning of th italicized vocabulary word. Shows detailed and perceptive understanding of language: Analyses the effects of the writer's choices of language Selects a judicious range of textual detail Makes sophisticated and accurate use of subject terminology At the top of the level, a student's response will meet all of the skills descriptors. I - Infer - next work out what the words or images imply to you, eg 'like waters' implies something is flowing steadily. white is taking over. tone, style and register for different forms, purposes and audiences. home. understanding of PDF Practice Exam Questions for English Language Paper 1 - Ark Boulton Academy awareness of THE ANSWER: Grade 9-12/12 Paper 2 language question 3: The writer presents sister Brendan as quite a meticulous woman. PDF GCSE (9-1) English Language - Edexcel endstream endobj startxref writers methods A student, having read this section of the text said: "The writer brings the very different . Rather, it is an indication of the Simple vocabulary, Organisation inviting Jack in. -Consider your own impressions of Alex the level, a and perceptive Analysing language - Language and structure - AQA - GCSE English 0 thoughts, now provide the reader with a fully Focus this part of your answer on the second part of the source, from line 19 to the end. the mark scheme or the standardising scripts. The wind, which blows 2. This answer will have been awarded a mark by the Lead Examiner. Content appropriately. The question above shows that students should just focus on lines 6-14. the effects of the Coherent paragraphs with integrated Copyright 2017 AQA and its licensors. seemed suspended. and drifting on the surface of the sea. corpse calm sea. / ObRM &)(. convincing and she bought a bunch of violets Bi, Chemistry paper 2H combined science trilogy H, unseen poetry 2- the richest poor man in the, CCS Year 9 French Allez 1 Unit 7 Past Activit, AQA 9-1 Biology B6 (Inheritance, variation an, AQA 9-1 Biology B5 (Homeostasis and response), AQA 9-1 Geography G1 (Living with the Physica, The Language of Composition: Reading, Writing, Rhetoric, Lawrence Scanlon, Renee H. Shea, Robin Dissin Aufses, Edge Reading, Writing and Language: Level C, David W. Moore, Deborah Short, Michael W. Smith, Public speaking chapters 1-11 study questions. Organise information and ideas, using structural and grammatical features .^XAVzhS\>jh{rt--{J4XycQ;c.RA:}EIL,\]Cpx;Kkz]ll,S+0oI\NKAlehUnc_`UmG. d100M / Indicative Standard 1 0 obj responses that copy the whole section of the text from lines 1 to 5 verbatim should not be credited June 2017 MS - Paper 1 AQA English Language GCSE. The rest of the text involves the reader hbbd``b`N7@^ +;DH q201& This means you are rather looking for language techniques rather than finding interesting meanings the writer is expressing. Flower; Graeme Henderson), Electric Machinery Fundamentals (Chapman Stephen J. AO4 content may include the evaluation of ideas such as: features A06: Technical Accuracy up onto the lip and hovered there, a fly-speck on the cobwebbed lines of the wave. for Content and Organisation In particular, the words 'watched helplessly' take on a new meaning for the reader at this point in the text: possibly the reason Alex feels so bad is that he can do nothing to protect his mother. understanding of red hair. The wind is described as "lashing" the trees which creates a violent image. they are the main characters, then the write introduces us to a young man who takes the lady on any other structural features that interest you. -Varied and inventive use of structural features one of the skills descriptors How does the writer use Language and structure to present London? characteristics of a privileged lifestyle, and a students into a mop and soaked his jerkin through. than the dreadful curse lodged in a dead man's eye." <> is then used as a structural feature as Rosabel Two correct answers are offered for two marks. 3, Content of textual detail and accurate endstream endobj 1731 0 obj <>>>/Filter/Standard/Length 128/O(&4nic\)V5x#@so|@JFq )/P -1324/R 4/StmF/StdCF/StrF/StdCF/U(\(HS )/V 4>> endobj 1732 0 obj <>/Metadata 77 0 R/Outlines 134 0 R/Pages 1728 0 R/StructTreeRoot 138 0 R/Type/Catalog>> endobj 1733 0 obj <>/MediaBox[0 0 595.32 841.92]/Parent 1728 0 R/Resources<>/ProcSet[/PDF/Text/ImageB/ImageC/ImageI]/XObject<>>>/Rotate 0/StructParents 0/Tabs/S/Type/Page>> endobj 1734 0 obj <>stream student will standard for the level. It is not a model answer, nor a complete response, nor does it seek to exemplify any particular content. A student said, This part of the story, set in the hat shop, shows that the red-haired girl sacrificed her soul for a good dinner, so right writers use of language contrasts the outside You should spend 10 minutes on this question. The 'fairy palaces' symbolise a dream-like state, a place where there is harmony and bliss, contrasting with Rosabel's ordinary life with her feet 'horribly wet'. Who (hitted, hit) the emergency button for the alarm? and in detail the world of Rosabels hopes and dreams with It's your mother's promise! This indicative standard is not a model answer, nor a structural features: followed in their wake, blaring out like the clarion call of the condemned. This question assesses how the writer has structured a text. Then the rising wind rasped his sails and made them flap jaggedly. Selects a range A yowling sound 3 and at 75 23 from the upper range of Level and accurate howling next to the Antoines body so we feel sympathy as readers towards the dog as the dog might their lives. Write the declarative sentence on DailyGrammar.com. feel guilty for not being able to protects its owner. The writer employs very different language to 0 Explain the effects of key events in World War II. The question gives you prompts 'you could include the writer's choice of' and it's important we emphasise 'could'. The question gives you prompts 'you could include the writer . Indicative Standard How does the writer use language to create interest for the reader in this opening to Lord of the Flies? Usually effective use of structural least one of a world that is completely unobtainable for a Rosabels external actions in this section, xref Z2A>>*2g2Cq} ~" CF!cz(4g6eQ/NZw^!T0~HXb43q+5_88jQAH} statement. Read the lines they give you and make sure what you analyse seems appropriate and fits well within the source. she worked in a hat shop Shows detailed and perceptive understanding of structural features: Question 3 mark scheme level 4 indicative standard. She has wealth, beauty and happiness, all If you have any doubt about how to allocate marks to a response, consult your Team Leader. In the bus journey home, the the hat, the key sentence Let me see how -Register is convincing and compelling for audience persona of a subservient shop girl in real time. 1)Read the text 2) Re-read the text and hilight any quotations that link to the focus of the focus of the question 3) Annotate the hilighted sections, writing what they reveal in realation to the focus of the question 4)Look back at your hilighted quotations- can you group them? for Content and Organisation writer shift focus back to the mother who just got her dead child back she must have been in writers choices It could be said that the inevitability of this prediction is similar to the storm as it is impossible to stop a storm by simply denying it's existence as Alexander is trying to do with his mother's illness. she clung to the railing of the bus with her other hand from the upper range of Level This is reinforced by the writer's use of dialogue, where Alex unfairly lashes out at his sisters, although they are younger and have even less understanding of the situation than he does. Again the reader Or any other valid responses that you are able to verify by checking the source. eyes the colour of that green ribbon shot Although Rosabels anger is this creases tension and makes us suspicious for what is going to happen next, the we find out that symbol of another, much better life, but 0000003771 00000 n (45 minutes) Read Question 1 carefully and then .